Monday, January 04, 2010

hearts electrify
across telephone wires
winter static


This week's Haiku Bones prompt: electrifying

7 comments:

Nancy Bea Miller said...

Love it!

Staying in Balance said...

Thanks!

Anonymous said...

Clever haiku. Thank you for sharing it.

Yousei Hime

Anya Padyam said...

Great Haiku!

Artist Victoria O'Neill said...

perfect!

Gemma Wiseman said...

Love the powerful use of "static" to close the poem!

Staying in Balance said...

I like to keep the "kicker" word at the end. Doesn't always work out that way, but i try!