Monday, January 04, 2010

hearts electrify
across telephone wires
winter static


This week's Haiku Bones prompt: electrifying

10 comments:

Nancy Bea Miller said...

Love it!

Dymphna said...

Thanks!

tasmith1122 said...

Clever haiku. Thank you for sharing it.

Yousei Hime

Dymphna said...

You're welcome!

Just someone said...

Great Haiku!

Dymphna said...

Thanks!

Artist Victoria O'Neill said...

perfect!

Dymphna said...

Thanks!

Greyscale Territory said...

Love the powerful use of "static" to close the poem!

Dymphna said...

I like to keep the "kicker" word at the end. Doesn't always work out that way, but i try!