Karumi is the Japanese word for "lightness". The famous Japanese poet Basho used it to mean "the beauty of ordinary things spoken of in a simple way".
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Clever haiku. Thank you for sharing it.Yousei Hime
Great Haiku!
perfect!
Love the powerful use of "static" to close the poem!
I like to keep the "kicker" word at the end. Doesn't always work out that way, but i try!
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Love it!
Thanks!
Clever haiku. Thank you for sharing it.
Yousei Hime
Great Haiku!
perfect!
Love the powerful use of "static" to close the poem!
I like to keep the "kicker" word at the end. Doesn't always work out that way, but i try!
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