Monday, August 23, 2010

old baby pictures
      smile at me from the wall

my face is pensive


One Single Impression prompt:  Pensive

12 comments:

The Write Girl said...

This is a very clever poem...I like the image you paint here. A neat take on pensive.

Ramesh Sood said...

I am sure the smiles of these grownups now delight you.. lovely take on the promp.. amazing.. this inspires me to invite you also to visit.. A Little More Than Ordinary , my page to bless my 100th post and also to laugh a bit

Staying in Balance said...

Thanks, Ramesh!

SandyCarlson said...

Beautiful, friend.

mareymercy said...

I like how you start out describing the pictures, but end up describing your own "picture."

Anonymous said...

short and sharp !!

Staying in Balance said...

Thanks! I just realized not long ago that my "default" face in most baby pictures really is contemplative and pensive. It's just the way I'm made.

TACParent said...

This is neat. I can "see" your pensive face. I think pensive is a word that is hard to describe and use accurately. You did a graet job with it.

Staying in Balance said...

thanks!

Sandra.if said...

love this!!

Staying in Balance said...

Thanks!

Michele said...

very interesting! :D